Veronica at EBAFF, Bronx, NY - "The Truth" An Interesting Story

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an 8th Grader in Mr. Allison's New Journalism class at East Bronx Academy for the Future.I 'am a cool person I could get kind of annoying sometimes. I like to spend time with my family. I 'am an 8th grader that has goals and my goals are to finish all my grades and graduate from college and get a good job to help my mom.I want my parents to be real proud of me.
Things I like in school is to make friends and hangout with friends. I don't have a favorite subject but i will prefer English class better than math class I am not all that good at math but i do try. I do way better in English class.
Things I like outside of school is to spend time with family and friends.I have so much family members but that sometimes we all don't fit in one place but lucky for us me and my aunt lives in the same building so when we do parties all we do is use both apartments mines and my aunts.I have three brothers and 8 nephews 1 niece i don't see them much but when i do we have a blast together even though they are way younger than me i make the best out of me and my nephews and niece to have fun.Also when am with my brother i have so much fun they are older than me i don't see them much but they always there for me like big brothers they are.

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10/06/2008

"The Truth" An Interesting Story

I found a story in Space #3 by Meghna

I really enjoyed reading her story it was real emotional and she used good punctuation. “The Truth (Part-1),is a real good story I like the way she made the story sound is mad it sound real.

One sentence that stands out for me is: ““How life has changed,” she wondered. Sometime back she could not even kill the little ants but now…now she went around murdering people,” I think this is real sad because she is doing all of that for the love of her life and is messed up the way that the love of her life and his parents lied to her once ya read the hole story ya will find out about how they betrayed her.
I think that the people that read this will go and read her hole story “The Truth” is a real good story. I will love to be able to write stories like Meghna does her stories are great.

I look forward to seeing what Meghna makes next, because her stories are wow so great and really interesting. If she keeps up with her great work she can probably become a professional writer. Meghna keep up your good work and good luck.

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