Veronica at EBAFF, Bronx, NY - Darkness A Really Good Poem

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an 8th Grader in Mr. Allison's New Journalism class at East Bronx Academy for the Future.I 'am a cool person I could get kind of annoying sometimes. I like to spend time with my family. I 'am an 8th grader that has goals and my goals are to finish all my grades and graduate from college and get a good job to help my mom.I want my parents to be real proud of me.
Things I like in school is to make friends and hangout with friends. I don't have a favorite subject but i will prefer English class better than math class I am not all that good at math but i do try. I do way better in English class.
Things I like outside of school is to spend time with family and friends.I have so much family members but that sometimes we all don't fit in one place but lucky for us me and my aunt lives in the same building so when we do parties all we do is use both apartments mines and my aunts.I have three brothers and 8 nephews 1 niece i don't see them much but when i do we have a blast together even though they are way younger than me i make the best out of me and my nephews and niece to have fun.Also when am with my brother i have so much fun they are older than me i don't see them much but they always there for me like big brothers they are.

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09/06/2008

Darkness A Really Good Poem

I found a poem in Space #3 by Danielle.

I really enjoyed reading the poem “Darkness” it was really interesting.Darkness was like about someone that was trap in a dream and in his or her dream was real dark.

One sentence that stands out for me is when she wrote “The darkness surrounds her from both sides” that stands out for me because is like she is trap and she got no where to escape from.“I hope this is just a dream of a dark tunnel” I think this is a really good poem and it makes lots of sense because it shows how she is having a real bad dream and a dream she hopes to wake up from some day. Danielle really did a good job I really like the way she set up her poem.

Another sentence that I really liked was “I travel through the dark tunnel and see a bright light” It stands out to me because it shows how she is almost escaping from herdark dream.

I look forward to seeing what Danielle makes next, because she writes real good poems and they make lots of sense. What will bring me back to reading her poems is to see more poems like “Darkness.”

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