I found a story in Space #3 by Meghna
I really enjoyed reading her story it was real emotional and she used good punctuation. “The Truth (Part-1),is a real good story I like the way she made the story sound is mad it sound real.
One sentence that stands out for me is: ““How life has changed,” she wondered. Sometime back she could not even kill the little ants but now…now she went around murdering people,” I think this is real sad because she is doing all of that for the love of her life and is messed up the way that the love of her life and his parents lied to her once ya read the hole story ya will find out about how they betrayed her.
I think that the people that read this will go and read her hole story “The Truth” is a real good story. I will love to be able to write stories like Meghna does her stories are great.
I look forward to seeing what Meghna makes next, because her stories are wow so great and really interesting. If she keeps up with her great work she can probably become a professional writer. Meghna keep up your good work and good luck.
I found a poem in Space #3 by Danielle.
I really enjoyed reading the poem “Darkness” it was really interesting.Darkness was like about someone that was trap in a dream and in his or her dream was real dark.
One sentence that stands out for me is when she wrote “The darkness surrounds her from both sides” that stands out for me because is like she is trap and she got no where to escape from.“I hope this is just a dream of a dark tunnel” I think this is a really good poem and it makes lots of sense because it shows how she is having a real bad dream and a dream she hopes to wake up from some day. Danielle really did a good job I really like the way she set up her poem.
Another sentence that I really liked was “I travel through the dark tunnel and see a bright light” It stands out to me because it shows how she is almost escaping from herdark dream.
I look forward to seeing what Danielle makes next, because she writes real good poems and they make lots of sense. What will bring me back to reading her poems is to see more poems like “Darkness.”
My family “wow” I can say so much about them like how special they are to me. I know that every thinks they family are special ofcourse but mines is special because they are always there for me. Also because we together all the time. Like in the summer we make lots of picnics and me and my cousins chill. Almost every weekend we have a birthday party becuase my family is so big that every has a birthday. On holidays like christmas,thanksgiving and new years we always cook and have a get together and every comes over either to my house or my aunts house most likely they will come to my house. My family is real cool we will be together in bad and good times no matter what. Yes my family have their little problems at times but they always fix it.
This year for the summer I might go to Puerto Rico thats from where me and my family from most of my family is here in the Bronx but a few is over at Puerto Rico so I am going over there to see the rest of my family over there and also my grandmother from my dads side that she is sick and I wanna go see her. But am only stayin over in Puerto Rico for one week and when I get back to the Bronx am going to spend it chillin with my cousins and the family we going to have so much fun like go to the pool and do picnics and much more things.
Well my family is the most wonderful thing in my life I wont chaned them for nothing in the world not even for all the money in the world my family in worth more than anything. I love them and I will always be there for them. Thats why I wanna be someone in the future for like that I could make them proud of who I am.
I found a video in Space, Issue #2 by Riley, Matt and Mike.
I enjoyed looking at “Dora,” because it was really funny and fun to watch.
One part that stands out for me is where she used funny characters that represented the real ones like the turtle that represented dora. I think this is really creative because he used clay to play the characters. Another reason is because he made it look like the real show just using different characters. This stood out for me because it was real funny and entertaining to watch.I do really agree with Riley, Matt and Mike. One reason I say this is really creative. Another reason I agree with him is because he found a nice way to make people luagh.I look forward to seeing what makes next, Riley, Matt and Mike becuase it looks like he knows how to make shows more funny and fun to watch.