June 2008
3 posts
"The Truth" An Interesting Story
I found a story in Space #3 by Meghna
I really enjoyed reading her story it was real emotional and she used good punctuation. “The Truth (Part-1),is a real good story I like the way she made the story sound is mad it sound real. One sentence that stands out for me is: ““How life has changed,” she wondered. Sometime back she could not even kill the little ants but now…now she went around...
Darkness A Really Good Poem
I found a poem in Space #3 by Danielle.
I really enjoyed reading the poem “Darkness” it was really interesting.Darkness was like about someone that was trap in a dream and in his or her dream was real dark.
One sentence that stands out for me is when she wrote “The darkness surrounds her from both sides” that stands out for me because is like she is trap and she got no...
How can we help stop pollution?
How can we help stop pollution? Okay we can help pollution by keeping the environment clean and recycling. Most people don’t think that recycling is necessary why don’t know why. I think people should start caring for their environment because if people don’t then the environment will get worst. I like to recycle and keep things where they belong. Plenty of people like to litter...
May 2008
5 posts
My family
My family “wow” I can say so much about them like how special they are to me. I know that every thinks they family are special ofcourse but mines is special because they are always there for me. Also because we together all the time. Like in the summer we make lots of picnics and me and my cousins chill. Almost every weekend we have a birthday party becuase my family is so big that...
My Mother The Best
My mom wants the best for me and she wants me to be independent and not depend on anyone. So I understand why she is so stricked because she wants me to be someone in the future. My mother is always on top of me to do my best in school and to not get distracted. She is always telling me to never give up and always keep going no matter what is the case. She works hard for me to get the best...
Who is going to be the next president?
I think Hillary Clinton should be president. I think that she should be president because she will be the first female president. Also because we should give a females a chance to do something like be a president. Also becuase we should see how good she does being president. Hillary should be president because a female president can do as much as a men does as president. Much people believe that...
My weekend
On my weekend I didnt do anything all I did was go outside and on saturday my nephews came over to my house.They slept over my house.We played xbox and we played fight.Then on sunday my friend Miguel came over and we went outside and we went to take one of my nephews to go get a haircut.Then we went to my backyard and played baseball and basketball.Next like at 7:30 we went upstairs to my house we...
Dora
I found a video in Space, Issue #2 by Riley, Matt and Mike. I enjoyed looking at “Dora,” because it was really funny and fun to watch. One part that stands out for me is where she used funny characters that represented the real ones like the turtle that represented dora. I think this is really creative because he used clay to play the characters. Another reason is because he made it look like...
April 2008
2 posts
During my break
During my break I didnt do much I was just chilling withh my nephew Xavier my cousin Alize and a friend named Miguel.From monday to friday i had to take care of my little nephew Elijah so we took him to the park and let him play around. We ate alot of Mcdonalds. Then on thrusday when my sister in law came to pick up my nephew me and my mother my nephew Xavier and y friend Miguel we went shopping...
Where I am From
I am my mothers perfume in the morningmy uncles colon at noonI am the park across the streets from my buildingI am from my neighbors and friends around the corner from my buildingI am from my cousins Alize, Shantel, Moises and moreI am from my mother asking hey Vero how was school today?“‘What did u do when you got home?”I am from my mothers side of the family my aunts Maria...
March 2008
2 posts
"Friday"
Friday I didn’t Come to school Because I woke up Extra late so I just stood home. I went to sleep For like another hour more Then I woke up And started cleaning my room I finish cleaning my room at like 1:40 pm When i finish I went to Get my clothes Then I went to Take a shower I came out the shower Got ready and called my friend To see if he was coming He came then we...
10 Questions About The World
Why doesnt Bush end the war? Why is there so many crimes and criminals in the world? Why is the government so cruel with immigrants? Is the world going to get better? Is the government going to help the people over at Darfur? Who is going to be the next president?
February 2008
3 posts
Darfur
Darfur and lots of people are dieing.30 thousand people have been displayed.Theres peace keepers that are protecting the people in Dafur.Since 2003 there has been lots of violence.1.5 billion people have been driven from their homes and 20,000 people have deid.“In the meantime, more than 2m people are living in camps after fleeing more than four years of fighting in the region and they are...
RE:Bored out of my mind
victoriar: I’m tired and i want to go home. why does Friday seem so long!BORING!!!!Today is so BORING!!What to do, what to do.after this i have social studies and then English,then to go home.YES!Today it’s raining. WHY!IT WAS A NICE DAY!DANG YOU!Veronica is going to sleep in social studies.I’M BORED OUT OF MY MIND! Focused Sentence: I’m bored out of my mind! I kno fridays be so boring...
My first vacation to Florida
My first time traveling to Florida was the best i had so much fun. I went with my brother, my parents,my sister in law and my nephews.I left in an airplane and my brother went driving he left before us. Then the next day me and my parents got there. We got there like at 3:00 in the after noon.When i got there to Florida i took a nap then when i got up i got in the pool with my nephews we played a...